Extract 1
Friday, November 18, 2005
Urgh.. Charms is not turning out too good. Might consider just retyping all the ideas I have developed in my drafts into a new document, totally not caring about what I hav typed in the first place. then, after I rechecked the new doc, I'll just trash the current one I'm using. I currently have 2 docs containing all the extracts I have posted, each leading the story in a different direction. I worked on this story line cos I this easier to bring across my point, so the other is not finished. Nevertheless, Charms will be retyped.
Meanwhile, to keep up with posts, I shall post this extract of yet another story. I'm not gonna post the title this time round, though one ought to have at least a rough idea of how this might turn out. The story is undergoing construction in yet another word doc and this extract is from 2 of the paragraphs.
A tall slim figure stepped into the conference room. The woman’s entrance immediately captured the attention of all the other consultants, as well as that of the manager, with whom the consultants present were trying to clinch a deal with. The frown of impatience disappeared from the manager’s face.
What exactly was it that made her so attractive, it is hard to say. Maybe, it was her long silky hair resting on her slender shoulders. Maybe, it was the fair, blemish-free face that this ebony hair framed. Or maybe, it was the pair of deep-set amber eyes, enhanced by dark, long eyelashes, that seemed to hold a somewhat enchanting beauty. Or could it just be the calmness that one can feel in her presence, the calmness in the knowledge that everything is under control? Anyone could tell that this gorgeous woman could summon beauty beyond description. But a professional would tell you that she is of “model quality”.
Qoute of the day (not from me though): Royston types immediately into his posts without having to first go through it many times on a word doc; and his works are of supreme quality.. I didn't say that but nevertheless, I shall put it here.
Meanwhile, to keep up with posts, I shall post this extract of yet another story. I'm not gonna post the title this time round, though one ought to have at least a rough idea of how this might turn out. The story is undergoing construction in yet another word doc and this extract is from 2 of the paragraphs.
A tall slim figure stepped into the conference room. The woman’s entrance immediately captured the attention of all the other consultants, as well as that of the manager, with whom the consultants present were trying to clinch a deal with. The frown of impatience disappeared from the manager’s face.
What exactly was it that made her so attractive, it is hard to say. Maybe, it was her long silky hair resting on her slender shoulders. Maybe, it was the fair, blemish-free face that this ebony hair framed. Or maybe, it was the pair of deep-set amber eyes, enhanced by dark, long eyelashes, that seemed to hold a somewhat enchanting beauty. Or could it just be the calmness that one can feel in her presence, the calmness in the knowledge that everything is under control? Anyone could tell that this gorgeous woman could summon beauty beyond description. But a professional would tell you that she is of “model quality”.
Qoute of the day (not from me though): Royston types immediately into his posts without having to first go through it many times on a word doc; and his works are of supreme quality.. I didn't say that but nevertheless, I shall put it here.
